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Wings of Immortality

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Literature Text

Immortality, spread your wings
Wrap them upon me as I wish for you
I wish to have the greatest power
And hope that through this method
I will gain that power

Immortality spread your wings
Wrap them upon this young child
As I recognise that I was a fool
And hope that through this method
He will never make the mistake I did
Two different characters, wishing for the same thing for completely different reasons.

First verse: The man is asking for self-immortality. This version is hard to do, but the person recieving the immortality gains a strong power if it is done correctly.

Second verse: The man is asking for vessel-immortality. This version requires a younger being, and allows the person recieving the immortality to pass on all traits to the younger being for any reason he desires.

Just something I noticed.
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave's avatar
I don't think that's the kind of immortality we should wish for.