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I've been locked away in my worst nightmare
And I've seen the depths of the Living Hell.
A dark forest where the trees continuously laughed
With demonic voices that would stab into the soul.
In this forest there are two doors of gold.
One takes you into the witch's lair
Where she eats young girls whole.
The other takes you away,
Locking you into the Shadow Heaven.
Don't be fooled by the Shadow Heaven's peace,
It will lock you away in your dreams;
You'll never be seen again.
If you wish to get out of this forest
You must choose a door
Or wait an eternity.
Playing around a bit with ideas.
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:iconwolfgirl2403:
wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ah~ I like this one. Very dark and imaginative. :)
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AsakoBunny Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, glad you liked it!
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:iconwolfgirl2403:
wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure~ Yay 
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
So many ideas and mystery in such a short piece :)
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AsakoBunny Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Everything was bouncing around in my head during this one!
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:iconkillerlord123:
killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014
I can see that. Looks like this poem is made of little pieces of others.
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HyacinthChan Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  New member Student General Artist
Then your mum came in your room and said: get up! My girl! Today's school! Then all the witches had gone away and you see your room.
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AsakoBunny Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Perfect! :D
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